1. Volume of recording was consistent. 2. You covered most of the required information.
Weaknesses
1. Your delivery needs major work. a. There was a lot of muttering, stuttering, and hesitation in your performance, making your presentation difficult to understand at times. 2. You repeated information, for example the names of the children and how the Bushes met.
Weber
ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. Volume of recording was consistent.
2. You covered most of the required information.
Weaknesses
1. Your delivery needs major work.
a. There was a lot of muttering, stuttering, and hesitation in your performance, making your presentation difficult to understand at times.
2. You repeated information, for example the names of the children and how the Bushes met.
Overall grade 25/30 B